Omg again i love it. u r very talented. i read ur other poem too. they r both so good. i lvoe them.. i can relate to how u write.. keep it up.. i wana read more of ur poems.. great job
take care
angie

Hah il0ve the p0em! its really g00d!! keep writing !
l00k at s0me 0f mine t00 if y0u want!
aLi

Awww antoher really sad poem i can relaly ralte to your poems, like i said before if you need to talk im here

I wonder those things too... the purpose of life.. i dont think we'll ever figure it out completely. maybe when death does come to get us. if i get to heaven i'll be sure to ask god lol. great poem jason =) im really glad you joined the site

I can really relate to this poem. It was very good. I like the topic. Great job.

I seem to be able to relate to all fo your poems like most of the people who commented b4 me. You write very well, and this one had a ver unique stlye, athat i thought was captivating, never knowing where it was going to go. God job hun. 5/5

ravyn

Loved the writing on this poem, though its not really in stanza form, it still flows together well. plus this is just so relatable for me. these are all the questions i wanna ask. 5/5

I see that most of your poems have to do with darkness and i understand where your coming from! i like the flow of this poem 5.5

Very well expressed piece, the use of questions throughout this is very effective giving it depth and making the reader think-in turn giving it power.
The ideas run smoothly into one another, but at the same time have a unpredictable quality. It is very well written in general with no real weak areas

I dwell in the past searching for the answers,
all I find is pain,
trying to escape from the past,
I cant get away,
is there anyone to help me?
or am I forever alone?..
[That stanza was really good]

I don't even care about rhyming and flow and everything for this one. I thought the emotions you put in this was really strong and again I can relate!! Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.