The darkness of my thoughts

by we_all_live_to_die   Jun 21, 2006


As I lay in the darkness
the darkness of my thoughts,
a tear slides down my cheek,
as I think of the past
wishing it all would just fade...

My life seems cursed,
forever in darkness,
everyone seems happy,
but what about me?

Left all alone,
destined to walk this lonely path,
with nobody beside me,
will I always walk alone?

when i think of what was,
I wish it wasn't,
I wonder will I ever find it again?

what if I do,
what if I don't,
in the end..
won't I be alone again?

I cry tears of sorrow,
praying to this so called "God"
down on my knees I cry,
"please just let it all end.. my promise never broken...
give me an end.."

I try so hard,
I try to be happy,
but can i be happy,
when i'm all alone?

My heart is empty,
bleeding alone,
betrayed by,
the only one I could trust,

and now i'm bleeding,
still all alone,
will anyone find me?
or am I destined to walk alone...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cynthia

    Wicked Poem. You got the exact meaning I was aiming for with one of mine, but unfortunatly I'm not that good with words ;) Keep it up, you poems or Wack!

  • 17 years ago

    by jaimie

    I WILL WALK WITH U

  • 17 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    Some part of me wishes I could reach out and help, sorry if that sounds a little...odd, to say the least. I realate so much to your poems, and I love the way they read, and the style of them. They are all very good! 5/5(again!)

    Ravyn

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    My life seems cursed,
    forever in darkness,
    everyone seems happy,
    but what about me?
    [I liked that stanza! Speshly the question.]
    With your i's, Try and captialise them.. Some people downvote poems for things like that. So just try do use the best grammer you can. =)

    Usually I don't really like poems that always repeat certain words. Like you repeated 'alone' quite abit. But I actually liked it. Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 17 years ago

    by cuppycake

    Hmm, i like this one, the meaning of it all and the question you never quite can answer.
    JBN

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