Comments : The darkness of my thoughts

  • 17 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Omg wow i lvoe it.. it has alot of emotion in it. its realy deep. but i can relate to it.. this is a great poem. it is jus amazing. it has great flow word choice and rhythm.. amazing job
    take care and stay strong
    angie

  • 17 years ago

    by dyingbrokenangel

    Woah this poem is just like me.. i can comeptly relateto this, i really hope everything is ok,
    awesome poem tho xox

  • 17 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    Your poems can bring tears to my eyes too... i wish i knew what to say for this one.. exept that you are a great poet, and a friend i should have gotten to know better a long time ago

  • 17 years ago

    by johnnys_princess

    So deep.powerful and emotional, great poem well done

  • 17 years ago

    by cuppycake

    Hmm, i like this one, the meaning of it all and the question you never quite can answer.
    JBN

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    My life seems cursed,
    forever in darkness,
    everyone seems happy,
    but what about me?
    [I liked that stanza! Speshly the question.]
    With your i's, Try and captialise them.. Some people downvote poems for things like that. So just try do use the best grammer you can. =)

    Usually I don't really like poems that always repeat certain words. Like you repeated 'alone' quite abit. But I actually liked it. Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 17 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    Some part of me wishes I could reach out and help, sorry if that sounds a little...odd, to say the least. I realate so much to your poems, and I love the way they read, and the style of them. They are all very good! 5/5(again!)

    Ravyn

  • 17 years ago

    by jaimie

    I WILL WALK WITH U

  • 17 years ago

    by Cynthia

    Wicked Poem. You got the exact meaning I was aiming for with one of mine, but unfortunatly I'm not that good with words ;) Keep it up, you poems or Wack!