Comments : Crimson River

  • 11 years ago

    by Smilesunshine

    I loved that! its so good..

  • 11 years ago

    by Candice

    Wow thats really go, good use of vocabulary and rhyming. beautiful poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Megan

    Really good keep it up 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Hi. i been seeing you on like every forum ive written in and i wanted 2 say ur an amazing poet! i love this poem because, like all of them, have excellent wording and descriptions! the rhyming was smooth too. gr8 work

  • 11 years ago

    by Lauren Crandall

    Magnificent.. It Gave Me Chills...

    \5|5/

    xLaurenx

  • 11 years ago

    by Natashia

    That was very well written....I could almost see what you wrote as if it were a movie in my head....well done...

  • 11 years ago

    by Candice

    Wow, this is very good. I love the flow and rhyming within this peice of work. Excellent use of words. Good Job. Keep it up! :) 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Candice

    Wow, this is very good. I love the flow and rhyming within this peice of work. Excellent use of words. Good Job. Keep it up! :) 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Fig

    Youve used such amazing images in this poem! especially with the descriptions including water. its a poem filled with emotion but described in such a distant way that it becomes sorrowfull. really well written.
    xxx
    (thanks for your kind comments on my poem)

  • 10 years ago

    by Elynnka

    Awesome poem! I really liked these lines:
    "Here I lay fading; a broken oath patiently waiting
    A king has fallen beneath the waterfall cascading"
    --- wonderful rhymes and flow throught the whole poem.
    Good work!
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Gem

    Crimson River, an amazing title, it made me want to read the poem right away.
    And such haunting words..
    As i read this poem, i got chills down my spine.
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 10 years ago

    by x Mo x

    That was a really great poem. It gave me an odd sort of feeling, not the chills, but something else. When I read it it reminded me of a few things yet it reminded me of nothing at all. The way the words were used and the way everything flowed and fit. wow.