Hi. i been seeing you on like every forum ive written in and i wanted 2 say ur an amazing poet! i love this poem because, like all of them, have excellent wording and descriptions! the rhyming was smooth too. gr8 work
Youve used such amazing images in this poem! especially with the descriptions including water. its a poem filled with emotion but described in such a distant way that it becomes sorrowfull. really well written.
(thanks for your kind comments on my poem)
Awesome poem! I really liked these lines:
"Here I lay fading; a broken oath patiently waiting
A king has fallen beneath the waterfall cascading"
--- wonderful rhymes and flow throught the whole poem.
That was a really great poem. It gave me an odd sort of feeling, not the chills, but something else. When I read it it reminded me of a few things yet it reminded me of nothing at all. The way the words were used and the way everything flowed and fit. wow.