Comments : Roses

  • 17 years ago

    by Aken Sol

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    5 poems in one day is inhuman. You sick twisted man.

    Aken Sol

  • 17 years ago

    by Joy

    Aww def. true. Words on paper will always last longer than any flower...unless it's fake...

    Anyway, great write. I liked the flow.

    joy*:.xx

  • 17 years ago

    by johnnys_princess

    Yes this poem was definately worth more than a thousand roses and a million violets, very well writen, good rhymes, flowed beautifully. 5/5 once again

  • 17 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This is an original poem, I liked the way you described roses differently from what I'm used to.
    Here are the answers for the questions:

    * What did you understand?
    I understood that a rose may not last forever, but when you say something to someone that person can always remember that, and that will exist forever.
    * How did it make you feel?
    I just thought about how strong words can be.
    * Which part did you like? Why?
    I like the last lines, because I think they're saying: maybe things will change but my love for you will always stay.

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww..thats sweet! you always have a funny way of looking at things, and i like that about you .. lol! this poem flowed well, used nice descriptions.. and i liked the idea.. i liked this bit best though:

    We all know
    that with every passing hour
    of every passing day
    the head slowly droops,
    and another petal falls away.

    it is so descriptive and has great imagery.. nice job! 5/5
    ____________________________

    i would love to do a collaboration with you at any time.. but i'm just afraid i might let you down.. hehe

  • 17 years ago

    by amandaa

    You're a deep thinker.
    Good stuff.

    *Butterfly

    (p.s: I loved the poem)

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Outstanding! I adore this poem from beginning to end. The flow, the message, simply beautiful!
    As I read it, I really didn't think it could get better, but then I read the last line and found out I was wrong.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 17 years ago

    by Kevin Dizzle

    Hey thanx for sticking up for me in that contest i started, but didnt finish

  • 17 years ago

    by Polly

    Aww this poem is so sweet and unique I love it! I've never read anything like this it's really meaningful. 5/5!
    Polly