Wow.. what a powerful write! it was definetely very dark.. the descriptions you used were amazing.. this had brilliant imagery.. nice job! 5/5

Haiku, nonet, reverse nonet, haiku

Sounds like the form I recommended to you.

(That rhymed)

I think one thing that was really well done was your diction; you didn't repeat words unnecessarily, and made sure that you kept things fresh for the reader by changing some words up. It would have been easy for this poem to be much worse if you hadn't been so careful with the words you chose. Good work, and nice grammar.

This poem captures the difficulty of the topic and brings out the pain involved as well. I think that my favorite part about the poem, however, was the format. The haiku simplifies and adds choppiness, characteristic of fear and anguish and the nonets add to this also, starting off with long lines, diminishing to short and then lengthening again. Nice job.

I like the unpredictability in this poem, and the descriptions and especially the structure of it! (like the way you wrote it) I thought it was very cool. It seems as if you're oushing against something mentally and can't take it anymore. I love the emotion you portrayed here. Great job, but I sincerely hope that it's not true.

Man...where do I begin?
First off, the ability to convey such a powerful message within the confines of not only one but three different poetry styles is astounding.
Then there's your flawless choice of words, pure brilliance. Each line delves deeper into the inner battles with what's being done to her against her will. Simply outstanding!
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Interesting write. Really it had been cool because the words had made it stand out. It was great on word choice because it was really just well done to bring about the imagery.
~Faith-less

Wow, great write! It had such a powerful message! I loved the way you used your words it painted a wonderful picture in my mind!!! My favorite stanza was

"My thoughts shatter to oblivion,
although a million more remain.
Pieces fly across my brain,
making me feel insane.
Please don't look at me;
I won't let those
poisonous
lips touch
mine."

I loved the title! It drew my attention!!! 5/5!! Wonderful Job!!

Good choice of words
with verygood lines on it.
Very interesting write.

God Bless!