When I dream it's you I always see,
And when I'm awake I'm wanting more.
[Normally I really don't like the word and but it fit so well here to connect the sentences. I like how this sounded when I read it. I didn't stumble. The flow was great.]
You are the flame that lights my candle,
[Candles are something I'm starting to like to read about but this sounded original in a way. At least how you worded it.]
The poem overall was pretty good. There was some really nice imagery and nothing was forced.

Awwwww!! that was so adorable.. aww.. i loved that! great job taleee! very very sweet poem with a lot of emotion.. really made me smile.. it flowed well and all the rhymes worked.. truly excellent job! you know what? i LOVE your love poems too! :P 5/5

Wow, beautiful. thankyou
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I really liked that poem. It's nice to know people can find true love. It's a comforting feeling.

*sighs* i love love! lol.. im in love at the moment... again... since yesterday... my crush for a year + has resparked... and do i feel lonely! i'm scared of falling for my best friend... it hurts.

:) mitchell is quite lucky that someone loves him. many never feel loved.

well, gl and hf.. bye :)

Awww.. that's so sweet!! I loved the way I felt as I was reading it!! The flow and rhyming was good. There was a lot of emotion put into it. Beautiful! 5/5

I think it was a very sweet and beautiful poem. I don't care in the lewast that it's older, I like it as much as the newer ones of yours I've read. I give it a 5/5.

keep it up,
Ravyn

Great job...The feelings you expressed all through it was amazing...It was a wonderful peice..Again great job...
Emma 5/5

Ah I love this one! I have read it before but had no time to comment and now I must say I am at a loss of words. I wanted to, for a long time. write a poem just like this one, but I guess you heaved the words before I was even able to think about it. Keep up your fantabulous writings! I enjoy reading them. 5/5

That was really cute. My favorite stanza was:
Without you I don't know what I'd do,
Cause it's only with you I belong.
Words can't explain what I feel for you,
And I know it's real, It can't be wrong.
I loved that stanza. Anyways, the poem was really good and the flow and rhythm of it was really good, it seemed a bit forced at times, but it was still good. Great job on this. 5/5*

Great poem I really like it............Um the flow is really great you fixed it up well.....

That was unexpectedly a pretty decent poem. not to say your a crap poet or anything. Cause honestly i never read any of your work before (well atleast i don't remember) so i wouldn't know. Its just i never got passed the first paragraph and ive opened this poem about a 30 or so time. Maybe its because it 330 in the morning, and i've browsed around this site during my 5min breaks for the last 3 hours. and its simply the best thing i've read thus far, or i might be because i decided not to judge it by the first paragraph, read the whole thing through and liked it. So like i said it's a pretty decent poem. (this is all the niceness you can get from me :P)

I really liked this one. so full of heartfelt words. Greatly expressed yourself there hun. Thanx for reading my work. I appreciate it very much.

Good poem hun!
I love the 5th stanza, its the best of all!
keep it up
NemO xoxoxox

Hey natalie, its arunima. i was glad to see your honest comments over my poem and i appreciate it completely. i loved your poem. its simple yet so elegant. keep the fire up. love to hear from you.

Great poem!! It's nice to hear a happy love poem!!

Hey darl another amazing poem. i always luv reding love poems. this was great. great use of words and its well structured too. keep up the great work =D xx