I wanna cry adds reading this
you touched my soul
awesome job
my best wishes for a prosperous life
your friend
Rohan
do see my poems dear

I wanna cry after reading this
you touched my soul
awesome job
my best wishes for a prosperous life
your friend
Rohan
do see my poems dear

Nice work i like wat u said kepp the good work up

Hey i love this poem
well done keep it up
xox bree xox

Wow, its so sad and makes you want to cry.
Its so beautifully written and so easily understandable.
Taegan Emily
xx

Wow, I stopped for a minute and not to think "don't cry" but it's so touchy, sometimes don't have to write deeply to describe, your peom simply went pretty amazing, and you wrote it good! U R TALENT!