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by mossgirl19   Jun 25, 2006


Loving is a lovely thing
every moment spent is love
like forever young roses we seem
like rivers that fear not of drying
our wings we thought we always flap
fishes that thought the sea was blue
love is lovely thing
one moment we never permit to pass
a sit beside the special one
can make us feel we are best
and though we carry heavy burdens
they seem to vanish in a flash
whenever the special one comes
they make us feel happy
one look all it takes
one moment to be together
one smile it all completes
one special one in our lives
we\'ll never look for more.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This has such beautiful sentiments and really says so much more upon each reading.I like your unusual wordings(though 'flap' in the 5th line strikes me personally as a bit awkward), though I love your images/metaphors-especially lines 3 & 4.This whole piece sums up the truth and beauty of love.Very nicely written, and a beautiful message indeed.

  • 17 years ago

    by Elisa

    Wow. that is all i could possibly say