Comments : Four Letter Words

  • 17 years ago

    by limp

    Crave intimacy,
    Spinning round on Ecstasy; make yourself dizzy on the edge.
    Wish you meant more,
    Meant more than just these four letter words.
    You should be waking up in someone else's arms.
    'Cause there's no time like the present to say,
    That I like you, but I just don't care enough,
    To fool around with love.

    those lines made me change my knickers. well not really because that's just filthy. but that's how they made me feel alriiight? yeahk. :]
    this is sexual, SECKSUIL i tell you. lalaaaaaaa.x
    yupseeiloveyerstuff!11

  • 17 years ago

    by limp

    Naughty buggerrrrrrr :]

  • 17 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    Wow, and its always the really deep heart feeling poems that always get me. and this one definately has.
    your an awesome writer and brilliant poet.
    please keep writing and stay safe strong and healthy,
    *AntiSocial16*

  • 17 years ago

    by limp

    I DON'T LIKE IT MUCH EITHER D-CKED.
    so i think you should give me four ending lines :D
    kthx.

  • 17 years ago

    by limp

    Wow amazing piece lyk i really fink u could lyk get dis promoted into scooby douchebag or sumfan.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Are these song lyrics or free verse? Either way I like it. A lot of your poems seem like they could be lyrics to a song. I have enjoyed r/r/c on your work. Nice job.