Gravity

by Aussie   Jun 26, 2006


In an instant i hear a great boom
i'm pressed to the floor
no lower than the ground

my help was no louder
than screams of rushing air
that punches me against the ground

little red pieces of mine
spread across the floor
hoping to be glued back together again

but no stranger pass by
to fix me
friendless me

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  • 17 years ago

    by SaveMe?

    I like this poem i recon you should go further with it and make it longer! =]
    greatwrite keep it up =]
    5/5
    lovelove
    Alice
    xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Serenical Darkness

    Hey thanx for what you said about 'without you' i went ahead and finished it

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    That is really good.. i like the word usage that you had. very powerful. Great job on this! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by lonelynow

    I like it alot. i like how the title is not mentioned in the poem..dunno why, but i just liked that.

    great poem xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Serenical Darkness

    I like it dont stop. great job

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