That was sad. if it happened to u i feel for u. i hope it doesn't happen again.
love willow xxoo

This poem was absolutely awesome, really. you had good tone, and I like how you came back to that same verse everyonce in a while. it flowed really well, and you could relate to it. I'm sorry if this did happen to you to, i have friends who have gone through things similar. Good luck and keep writing. 5/5

A good poem....very touching...I love it....want to read more...

Great poem. Alot of emotuon was put into it.
And thanks for the comment.
5/5