This is so beautiful! You painted the
perfect picture when you wrote this poem. I loved it . 5/5

Letty

I enjoy reading poems so I have read many poems from many different authors and I want to tell all of the authors who work I enjoyed reading that they are great writers and the should not give up on poetry and the should keep up the good work you are one of those authors I have enjoyed reading your poems thank you for putting them out there!!!

"Where the mind is without fear
And the head is held high,
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Into that heaven of freedom my father
Let my country awake."
Tagore

On reading your composition I am reminded of the above poem from the Noble Laureat.

Sir,thank you for guiding me to the works of great writers.

I like the simplicity of this one. Expressed with simple lines. It's a very calm and touchy poem. Good one.

Oh yes...that is all we want another beautiful tomorrow. This is a hopeful write that has emerged from the clutches of darkness..liked it. Take care

Prayers under a kindled lamp
Is the only sign of hope
On seeing the flame burning
A ray of hope mingles with good thoughts

I like this verse and the image of hope it
gives for the heart..very nice.