Beats me as to why this poem made me cry but it did! I REALLY LIKED THIS...I haven't read a poem like this, it was definatley one that stands on here on PnQ because I've never read a style quite like this...I really enjoyed this write you two! I loved the beginning, and how questions were asked..those are my favorite kind of poems! Amazing job again!!
-Krissey

I love you man...
Till the ****ing end...
No matter what goes on...
You are always my best friend..

^^Really good ending!!

This was a good poem. But you gotta capitalise your I's lol =P

But I thought you both did a great job on it. Not a thing I would change, Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

P.S. Where's my cyber hug? huh? Lmao!

At the beginning I found it was a peculiar, different approach to sadness and depression, then it went back to the dreary way that many poets write on this site, and then your friend's poem burst in and cheered it all completely up. I especially liked these lines

You often ask..
Will i find the one...
And all i say to that...
Is love finds everyone...

I can't imagine that you are depressed if you have such a marvelous friend.
In a way, I was deeply touched, because I have some very happy friends, but I have not shown them how sad and scared I truly am. So yes, it was a brilliant poem, with a heartlifting end.

//T.L.//

Aww, that was very sweet. I liked it very much. It makes me think of my and my Ally. She's the light to my darkness, and the love to my hate. I love this poem, and thank you both for sharing it. Love it love it love it! 5/5

Ravyn

Good work. I really liked this poem, seeing both sides. It makes for a unique and well written poem.

It sounds like you would be worth the time.. but i dont think i am.. i know how that is.. it reminds me of a backstab behind the tears...