Don\'t Judge ME!!

by XnotaprettygirlX   Jul 1, 2006


You Sit There && Judge Me
By The Clothes That I Wear
&& The Dark Color Of My Hair
You Don't Even Know Me

&& How Ironic It Is
For You To Call Me A Poser
&& An Attention Seeker
How Can I Be This?..

..When I Don't Cry In Public
&& You Scream-Cry Out Loud
You Cut Your Wrist Then Your Proud
Yet I'm In The Corner All Silent

I'm The One Faking A Smile Everyday
&& Your The One That Only Cries When People Are Around
Yet I don't Even Make A Sound
&& I Hide My Tears Away

You Don't Know What I've Been Through
So Don't You Go And Judge Me
Cause You Yourself are A Hypocrite
Oh How I hate You

This World Is Unknown To My Scars
They Don't Hear My Screams
&& My Tears They Don't See
They Don't Know My Past

My Silence Is Deadly
But To Them I seem Happy
They Can't See Under This Facade
Of Fake Smiles, && Good Grades

SO Now You Tell Me That I'm A Poser
Yet Even After This Read
You still Won't Understand Me

--bit of a random, angry, pissed off written poem, on the spot--

please comment..help me to improve

I'm sorry
-angel-

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brian

    This is exactly how i feel
    you took the words out of my mouth
    so powerful and so true
    keep up the good work

    xx shaylee xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Fig

    Ooh! iu love the poem! its just like one i wrote! and youve described the emotion perfectly once again. i like all the death images and everything. its sooo like the poem i wrote! and with it being an on the spot pissed off ramble. a fantastic poem!
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Stacey

    I thought this was a very, very well-written poem, although the capitals on every word and the '&&'s detract from the overall success of the poem.

    Other than that, your EXTREMELY talented, well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by Darcie

    That was really good... Your very talented!