Comments : The Cloud

  • 17 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Wow..this poem is soo tru....well done yaar.....wen u write u always write an xcellent piece of poetry man.5/5.i really agree on ur point of view :)

    sonam

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Dhaval, this is such a powerful poem. Uplifting and inspiring! You are very talented, and I really enjoy reading your poetry, I don't always comment, but this one was so well done, I just had to say something. Amazing stuff Dhaval.

  • 17 years ago

    by Taylor

    I have never read anything like that before. You have the writing of some wise, old-english lad. The one who is taught about in litterature classes.. heard by all, appreciated by many, and touched by few. I swear, I won't be suprised if I see this poem in a book one day in the future.

  • 17 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    Another one of your poems I've read that makes absolutely no sense to me. It was still a very interesting read, but I wish you had been a bit more clear. Then again, I suppose some things that are completely clear to one person are extremely vague to another.

    I'm not going to rate this poem because I have absolutely no idea what it means and therefore can't really grade it fairly. It is written very well, though.