Comments : WHEELS OF LIFE

  • 11 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Thanks for the compliments..

  • 11 years ago

    by mira

    Love it soooooooooo much u just make me see the image and to feel the sun and the freedom i like the words and the thoughts in this poem well done

  • 11 years ago

    by Kumar kainth

    Well done Mery

  • 11 years ago

    by yogi73

    Very sweet message in the poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Victoria

    Cute ryhme! :)
    I love the truth you express in this poem.
    :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I don't think this poem should be further revised (I am not lazy haha) because it was written years ago, and reading this shows your evolution in poetry. It shows how much you've grown.
    Well done. I love the message
    -X

  • 11 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    I like the flow of this of this poem that i can relate to :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Good job. Ride on.