I love this poem it has so much emotion in it i hope you feel better soon hun

Wow... i abusolutly LOVE this poem it is now my favotite one... you did a awesome job on this one, i love it

andrea

Wow..... im speechless... short, yet so powerful. wow...

This seems like a poem you wrote to inspire yourself to enjoy life since I know you deal with a lot of depression. Very powerful and well written. Great work and take care!

It did have an emotional quality but it felt...like there should have been more. Really nice for the dark undertone that did give it a more....darker atmosphere that had the helpless state displayed nicely. So really...just powerful and a cool write.
~Faith-less

I L-O-V-E-D the last line, so powerful and deep.....Excellent poem, really sad and full of strength....
Okay I am really sorry to say that I have yto quit the club, I know I just signed in a week ago, but I really wanted to make a club of my own, but didn't know how, so some one aksed me to make a club with her and some one else and I accepted....I hope you don't "hate" me now?? I am really really sorry, but you know I am still here for you right?? always.....

Much Love Sabrina