Beautiful Job

A very beautiful haiku, Kaylee. I really liked the last line. "Orange sun rises" Gave it a great imagry. There's not much else to say about this. Since it's a haiku. But I thought you've done really good on it. 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

It's great coming back to read some of your work. nice haiku and it's one that leaves no need for further explanation.

good luck and peace
shobhana

Great poem. haiku's have such a nice style

That really painted a picture of when the sun first comes up, it was beautiful. Great poem.

--Steph

Well done
very good one this :)
keep it up

Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us
I have a new poem now "Phone Booth"- i would really appreciate it if you could read/rate it :)

Lovely image. Nice poem. :)