Comments : Rose(acrostic)

  • GREAT word choice and descrption, i love it xo

  • 17 years ago

    by None

    (acrostic, not acoustic)

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Since you could only make it 4 lines long. I thought you did a pretty good job on that. Again, You chose great choice of wording. It sounded beautiful. Keep it up! I love your work! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Just like Ocean - this was great! I loved it . Keep up the good work!

    **Samantha Hollywood

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Beautiful write. Amazing word choice. The description was perfect for a rose. For such a short poem it is very descriptive! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Wow, you sure do have a talent for acrostic poetry. Great work, i loved the flow and rhymes and the whole poem was amasing.

    --Steph

  • 17 years ago

    by Shawna

    You are very talented! I love how you described the rose, beautful!! I also like your different writing styles! I really need to start working on that!!

  • 17 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    This was also very well written. You are very good at writing acrostic poetry. Keep up the lovely work. You have an amazing talent!

    ~BJ~

  • 17 years ago

    by Nelle

    Ok, Well i also loved this one, you come up with great things to write about..wish i could think of them!! oh well lol great job

  • 16 years ago

    by KaKaSHi

    Apparently...u are a natural talent wen it comes to acrostic poems...very interesting...u can fit so much meaning into such a short poem...bravo..5/5
    oh and btw..thank you for commenting..but as for "The Day You Shed a Tear"...u can understand the meaning in different ways...but it has a story before it...see my best friend(i love her),well she tends to hurt herself instead of crying sometimes..so i kept asking her to cry..and she thought i wanted her to cry...so i told her that it really hurts me when she does and so on...she didnt seem convinced..so i wrote this poem for her..to show her its like the end of the world wen she sheds a tear :)