Hey great poem! Don't worry about people who down vote it and act all pathetic, seriously pity them- they must have very boring, empty and resentful lives! Anyways I enjoyed this poem and rated 5

LOVED these lines lol they are awesome

Today,
While you don't respect my feelings
Tomorrow,
The same feelings may not be.

Thank you all

A perfect poem, but i will not give you 5/5 cause you made me cry again.
It is truly the best poem ever, big hope for hopeless ppl. I love it.

Great work, i really liked the poem and the message, you shouldnt have to wait around for this person to realise how great you are.

Good job, keep it up.

--Steph

In every moment,
There is something new to see.
^^ I liked those lines most because its really true and I agree with you!!!
Really enjoyed reading a beautiful poem like this and definatley will vote a five!!

ITs great.. but you already know that

Very good!
i like the emotion with words, you seemed to make such weak words so strong with so much empathy!
keep it up!

Great poem! Very well written!
-May

A sense of threat there . Good job.

cheers,
Wishy

I really enjoyed the beginning a lot. i found it rhymed quite well and had a calm, loving, but lost feel to it. it uses a simple structure but you managed to get it to reach deep inside me and make me feel as if i were the one writing it and experiencing these feelings.

The second half however lost me a little. it made sense when looked at as a technicality but i failed to understand its relevance to the rest of the poem so far.

The most interesting thing about the second half however was that even thouhg i saw no obvious relevance, it still made me feel the lost love, "its ovre" emoitons. like, i dunno how, but this poem draws me in and i feel it's emotions as if it were my story. This is absolutely incredible. well done. congratulations. and magnificent poem overall.

-Suzie

Lovely poem, nice flow and real emotion xxALLYxx

Wow.. i loved it.. u didnt space out the stanzas, but its more beautiful that way coz it desplays continuity and it complements the theme of the poem.. lol..
its kinda short, but u managed to say evrything u had to say in it.. interestinf rhyme scheme, and gr8 flow..
its also self-esteemed, esp in the last lines.. i mean that it striked me as proud, the good kind.. like, ur in a relationship and two hearts, two minds becomes one, but u still retain ur individuality, and ur self-esteem is important and wont allow u to get hurt by someone who isnt giving u anything in return
(did i get that ryt??) well, thats wat i understood by the end of the poem..
just loved it
gr8 job
keep it up
take care
NannO

Well, this is also my favorite poem that you have written, it was great..it was different in a way, i cant really tell you why, b/c im not to sure but something about it touched me stronger then i thought it would! it was great!

Yeah this is great i think you made this one when your leaving the irao because of war right and you left the girl ...

hope you dont mind
but great poem ....

I think this is reallly reallly really GOOD
You have a great talent.
I like how some of the lines rhyme and some dont.
Mix it up ..good writing.
5/5

God Bless

-chris

Hmm...i liked this...it kinda made me think...it's really...interesting...excellent job...keep up the good work...
~*~lisa~*~
^.^

Sorry...stupid computer won't let me vote...
=(

Well done indeed, nicely thought out.

Hey, great poem, im gonna go check out a few more of yours. thanx for the comment on mine =]

This is a great poem also had great meaning and it was also very sad but i loved it