This is an amazing poem! I have never been in this position but have been close and hav felt a similar sort of feeling, only in a smaller dose. Really really good writing and rhyming! and I LOVE the last stanze especially the last 2 lines! keep up the amazing work and if this poem is true then try not 2 get in that position agen.
plz check out my poems (altho there not as good as yours!) fanx
xxxBETHxxx

Wow...this is haunting yet so real.
It's quite a soul seeking journey to say the least.
I really like the last two stanza's, man what a powerhouse ending.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Wow!