Comments : Ocean (Acrostic)

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Noni. This was beautiful. I love the ocean. And, I loved this Acrostic. Your choice of wording was FANTASTIC. You're a great writer! Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Your rhymes and rhythm went so smoothly -- i LOVED it!! You`re a great writer, keep it up. I also like how you chose to write a couple of acrostic poems, something not so commonly seem on this site. But i love to read them! I`ll go r/r/c your acrostic poem Rose, like I said I would in your thread =D
    Keep it up, and keep putting acrostic poems up!

    **Samantha Hollywood

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Wow you are sooo good at these kind of poems. You really sould do more! Both of the ones I read are perfect and show a lot of your talent. Great write! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Wow...that was really good. I usually have a hard time writing acrostic poems but you mastered this beautifully, i loved the way it rhymed. Great job.

    --Steph

  • 17 years ago

    by Shawna

    Great poem!! I could envision the fish swimming and playing!! Great job!!

  • 17 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    Wow. I loved it! It was short and very well written. I love the vocabulary! Keep up the great job!

    ~BJ~

  • 17 years ago

    by Nelle

    I can not leave a comment as long as these other people b/c i am not good with comments, but that was a very unique poem..great creativity, it was beautiful! i loved it

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, amazing imagery.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mj

    Very good poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by not a poet

    Love this one alot!!! beautiful!

  • 17 years ago

    by Oceansoul

    Really beautiful, liked it alot :)
    keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us
    I have a new poem now "Phone Booth"- i would really appreciate it if you could read/rate it :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Nada

    So simple, i like it

  • 17 years ago

    by julie

    The imagery created is very powerful, and you have used appropriate words, exceedingly effectively. A masterpiece indeed

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    Woah, beautiful and really great imagery. You did a fantastic job =] Keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by KaKaSHi

    All ur acrostics deserve a well earned 5/5 from me...like i said before...u truely have a talent...ur comments are constructive and helpfull..thank you

  • 3 years ago

    by Claire Barnett

    LOVE IT!!! Recommend it to any students who need a reference.

  • 2 years ago

    by Naira AL Rufaidi

    I LOVE ITT