Omg ur poems are awesome .. this one made me tear up:(:( keep it up!

Great poem, the vocabulary is simple but u can still describe everything well.. the rhymes are close to spectacular.. keep up the good work! by the way, thanks for your comment on my poem! thanks a lot, first i thought my poem is lame.. haha..

Its a great poem, i dont know if your a selfharmer, but i am and let me say you got it all right babe! keep it up xx

Very well written and descriptive, i just felt it ended unfinished, I think add to a little more, like the reason she cuts, what her mom did or her dad. Give the poem a sense of closure! But you're amazingly talented

This one was beautiful!!!!
i like how you said, "She may have cut once for you-"
it was sooooo moving . . . i dunno, i just liked it!
well done!
5/5!

and thanx for your comments! much appreciated!

Moving poem

Absolute work of art! its SO original, its like a breath of fresh air to read something that noones ever written before. really gets the point across too, its bitter but really sad