Her Sad Song

by Tina Carr AKA Snickers   Jul 5, 2006


Sitting in her room,
All day long.
She is sitting there singing,
Her own sad song.

A song about misery,
A song about hope.
A song about a problem,
and how to cope.

She wants someone to love her,
She wants someone to care.
But when she turns around,
Nobody is ever there.

She wants a family,
and some friends that she can call her own.
She wants all these things,
So she doesn't have to be alone.

She's hoping someone will love her,
She's hoping someone will care.
She hears something and turns around,
And notices that nobody's there.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    It was.....welll......it did have this weird way that made it interesting. Really enjoyed it but kinda didn't like some of the words which messed a little with the flow. But the last stanza was cool.
    ~Faith-less

  • 17 years ago

    by Stacey

    I really liked this
    & i can relate
    I like the way it was written it flowed well..kinda catchy!
    Anyways great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Porcelain

    Wow i like this one a lot!
    Geez i can really relate to it =[
    but anyway you have a lot of talent, ive read several of your poems, and they're really good. Its also nice to have someone here is also my own age lol. 5/5 =]

    anywayss... yeah.
    XO-- sarah

  • 17 years ago

    by Quiet Rejection

    Wow your talented, I like the poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by PoetInDisguise

    This is awesome
    your so good
    damn
    wouldnt that be kewl?

    well
    your so lucky to have a talent like this
    ur the best ive seen

    -katie

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