Really liked it very nicely written. Made me think. Very open to interpretation. 5\5. Take care. Love u to comment on any of mine.

Very twisted yet somehow awesome.

Amazing amazing i really love it a lot of emotion makes me want to cry.

I love this poem it has just become a favorit of mine

That was great and I more then relate to it ^_^ It took me a little bit to find that flow but once I did it fit together great and your choice of words was really good =)
A great job all in all =) 5/5
Rhea