Nice imagery! i like long poems too. i rate u five. good job girl

That was really nice. I loved the imagery that was put in that poem. Thankz for the comment you left on mine. 5/5

Ravyn

Nice nice nice i like it alot and long poems are the best to read

That was great work

well done its real touching
thanx for the comment on mine

lana

I loved it = )
I have 2 favorite paragraphs.
Really good.

Wow...completely and utterly amazing...seriously...you left me breathless on this one!! You used such IMAGERY...such deep, emotional description...i absolutely LOVED it!! No joke!! You are a VERY talented writer...and I can't WAIT to read more of your poems!! A-M-A-Z-I-N-G...and thanks for commenting on mine!! Greatly appreciated!! xoxo :) 5/5

This is amazing! Great metaphor - comparing yourself to the glass swan. Such an awesome idea! As other people said, good job with your imagery. Keep up the good work! =)

-*La Little Lor Lor*

Hey! Thank u bunches on the comment... i love your poems too... like the others said u use alot of imagery which is great... im bout like you i write them about everyday life but most of them are about my feelings that i cant really express or talk to anyone about so i write about them and mostly about relationships... thanks for the comment....

Wow thats was great. i'm sure that swan feels the same was as alot of peopel. ur a brilliant writter. u have pure talent. keep it. thanx for ur comment too.
Love willow xxoo

That was powerful, i loved it

Love what the poem is about, but you broke it up into sections and there was no reason to since you didn't have much of a rhyme scheme

Another great poem, kia. I love how u r so descriptive in all of ur poems.

This is very great writing your emotions are perfectly portrayed.
Cory