Wow..Great job
Diffrent
Great Rhyme
Awesome Flow
Right on point
good description
The Quialitiest of a good poem
and a very good topic
Nicely done
pleasure to read
5/5
~MF~

Beautiful!

great job w/ this one :) how r u?

if u ever have a bad day, can u plz read "a thousand things went right today"? i hope you'll like it