Well i think it's a brilliant Ottava Rima, even though i myself had neevr heard of it b4. lol. the poem by words only was remarkable. fantastic work : )

WOW!!! You are amazing at these kind of poems. The flow is amazing and the words you chose are perfect. It is a very strong poem---You should definately do some more of these! 5/5 Keep it up!

This was an amazing piece for being a first Nat! I loved it and enjoyed every word....I'm shocked you say it was your first time actually...like Kristy I haven't heard of this kind of poem but perhaps I'll/we will try it!!!

This is rly good i like it alot keep up the AWESOME work 5/5

Amazing, i like the stly i think you did a great job with it it didnt seem forced at all very well done.

jamie ellen

Wonderful job! Love this style

I thought this was a great poem. You managed to keep the form of the poem. It was really good, I liked the rhymes and there was a lot of meaning in it! Haha, great job Nat!!! woohoo!.. You kick butt :P

Well I don't really understand the otta whatever thing it is you are talking about...i'm just dumb lol but from what I read i loved the poem! I can relate to it in a lot of different ways...I can't really say you did great with the poem type thing b/c i have nooooo idea what it is..but i'm sure it was fine!! =) 5/5

Good writing, with great flow and good word choice. i like this form of poem, i may need to try it out. ;) 5/5

Hey i lyked ur poem it waz really nice can u tell me what u think of myne?

I LOVE UR POEM I THINK U A TRUE POET

Well done hun

Even though it was your first shoot at writing that type of poem you did a outstanding job. Shows a tru friendship, although you dont share everything and there is a good and bad you still are getting through.
Great job again

Juls

BEAUTIFULLL! I mean Nat, you write so amazing, and in so many different ways, that I am always continuously amazed! I think you should keep writing forever, your poems stand out on the top hun. Keep up your great work! 5/5 xxx

Wow i think you did a good job with this poem :) 5/5

This is a really good poem, i'm proud to have you on my favorites list, your the first of three. it's really great poem. it's beautiful ... so TOTALLY beautiful

--Mia--

Great work Nat, i really enjoyed reading this, i loved the last 2 lines:) This is a great style of writing, i might try it sometime.

--Steph

Nice poem..well done

Very good! I was kinda goin through somethin like that recently. I hope you get things worked out. Check out some of my poems if you get a chance! :)

I think it was a really good first try and a wonderful poem overall! Bravo... keep up the good work 5/5

Well done greate poem!