This was an amazing piece for being a first Nat! I loved it and enjoyed every word....I'm shocked you say it was your first time actually...like Kristy I haven't heard of this kind of poem but perhaps I'll/we will try it!!!
I thought this was a great poem. You managed to keep the form of the poem. It was really good, I liked the rhymes and there was a lot of meaning in it! Haha, great job Nat!!! woohoo!.. You kick butt :P
Well I don't really understand the otta whatever thing it is you are talking about...i'm just dumb lol but from what I read i loved the poem! I can relate to it in a lot of different ways...I can't really say you did great with the poem type thing b/c i have nooooo idea what it is..but i'm sure it was fine!! =) 5/5
Even though it was your first shoot at writing that type of poem you did a outstanding job. Shows a tru friendship, although you dont share everything and there is a good and bad you still are getting through.
Great job again
BEAUTIFULLL! I mean Nat, you write so amazing, and in so many different ways, that I am always continuously amazed! I think you should keep writing forever, your poems stand out on the top hun. Keep up your great work! 5/5 xxx