Wow. You certainly captured the sadness and intensity that surround Romeo and Juliet. The only criticism is that your punctuation stunts the flow somewhat.

Oh my. I can't believe I hadn't read this one either! This was amazing, Kaylee. You vocab was great thing. It was so different to most love poems I read. And that's what's so good about it. It's different and really cute at the same time. And another thing is, that you can write a sad poem, a love poem or even a nature poem or anything, and they're all fantastic. This one was beautiful and heartfelt, and I hope you know how talented you really are. I admire your writing. It's great. Keep it up! Hope to see some more poems from you. =P 5/5

Natalie``

This is beautiful and very creative, i love the delicate descriptions i was blown away. u need to take a gander at ur punctuation tho there are commas in teh middle of sentences!

-biscuit-