Comments : Bulimia

  • 11 years ago

    by Nelle

    Well, i would be the baby/sister/angel that brianna is talking about..lol, i definitely understand where your coming from, if this is true!! I wrote a poem about it once, but mine is definitely not this great...i loved it, i love it even more b/c i can relate so well, to it!! you did a great great job with the description, it was perfect! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, that's just a depressing story. We are the makers of our own life, and we choose our own path. I hope you make the right decisions, and take care of yourself. (If this is what you go through) If not, then this is a really creative write. Well done, it was really deep.

  • 11 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Wow----im speechless. Amazing write-everything is perfect about it-the flow, descriptions, word choice, emotions-everything. If this is true I hope you are ok [as ok as you can be]. This is a tough this to go through-its basically an addiction----Love the poem 5/5 Stay Strong!

  • 11 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Writing poetry is one way of reaching out for help, hopefully if this is a true portrait, you'll share this with someone close who can assist. Life is too short for self infliction. Take care, and keep writing.

  • 11 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Woah..
    If this isn`t a non-fiction poem ;; you really convinced me that it could be! It was just breathtaking, the rhymes and flow of it all. Amazing job. 5/5

    Hollywood

  • 11 years ago

    by Juls

    Amazing, I went throught bulmia and I still have a problem with eating. You are a strong person I just can tell by your words you write down, you can get through this.

    If you need to talk my email/MSN is bubblegirl290@hotmail.com

    Great work, i loved the words you used in the poem.
    Juls

  • 11 years ago

    by not a poet

    Great! i loved the description, it didnt tell you what it was, it made you picture what it was. wonderful!

  • 11 years ago

    by mary

    Is this true?????

  • 11 years ago

    by Natalie

    The acid starts to burn my throat,
    A twisted kind of pleasure,
    [Really liked those parts. I once got into throwing up what I was into. And the way you worded that part was fantastic!]
    My delight of destroying myself,
    Is tearing my life apart.
    [Loved those lines also. So much truth in it.]
    You've done a wonderful job on this babe. I just hope it isn't based on anything true. I'm always here if you need to talk. Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 11 years ago

    by ADyingProphet

    Seems like your life is as hopless as a last leaf on a dying autumn tree. good job.

  • 11 years ago

    by sophie

    OMG
    dis poem is beautiful huni
    i reli luv it i hpe its not real dough
    sophzxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Oooh hunni, I hope you don't really do this. I used to be anorexic a couple of years ago, and it still affects my eating pattern. I hope that you are ok :) But this poem is very well written, and you described everything very well, with some great word usage. Great job on this. Keep it up & Stay strong! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Tina Carr AKA Snickers

    Gah... I used to have problems with this. You explained it just as it happened. I could totally relate... I hope you're feeling better and have passed those dark times of life. They are very hard, trust me, I know.

    Really good use of imagery and rhyme.
    I love it.

    Love
    Tina
    < 33

  • 11 years ago

    by Haley

    That is really good

  • 11 years ago

    by Kyra

    OMG... I never knew so many feelings could be felt from 1 peice of writing.
    I really love this.
    ~Kyra~

  • 11 years ago

    by RaiScar*

    Wow, this was amazing. I had two friends that were bulimic. Great words, you got flow. I hope this isn't true, God forbid. Definately a 5/5. Keep up the good work darling!
    rai*

  • 11 years ago

    by Kayla

    This poem is the exact same poem in my book titled "perfect''

  • 11 years ago

    by Kayla

    This poem is the exact same poem in my book titled "perfect''

  • 11 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    No, it is not the same poem, i wrote this, this is my orginial poem and it shouldn't be in your book.

  • 11 years ago

    by Beautifully Nothing

    I am seriously at a loss of words. That was an amazing poem. I am going through it right now, and it feels like if you don't get to binge and purge your entire schedule has gone to hell. I am truly sorry for whatever inspired you. The poem makes you think a lot, wonderful job. Keep writing!