Well, i would be the baby/sister/angel that brianna is talking about..lol, i definitely understand where your coming from, if this is true!! I wrote a poem about it once, but mine is definitely not this great...i loved it, i love it even more b/c i can relate so well, to it!! you did a great great job with the description, it was perfect! 5/5
Wow, that's just a depressing story. We are the makers of our own life, and we choose our own path. I hope you make the right decisions, and take care of yourself. (If this is what you go through) If not, then this is a really creative write. Well done, it was really deep.
Wow----im speechless. Amazing write-everything is perfect about it-the flow, descriptions, word choice, emotions-everything. If this is true I hope you are ok [as ok as you can be]. This is a tough this to go through-its basically an addiction----Love the poem 5/5 Stay Strong!
Writing poetry is one way of reaching out for help, hopefully if this is a true portrait, you'll share this with someone close who can assist. Life is too short for self infliction. Take care, and keep writing.
The acid starts to burn my throat,
A twisted kind of pleasure,
[Really liked those parts. I once got into throwing up what I was into. And the way you worded that part was fantastic!]
My delight of destroying myself,
Is tearing my life apart.
[Loved those lines also. So much truth in it.]
You've done a wonderful job on this babe. I just hope it isn't based on anything true. I'm always here if you need to talk. Keep it up! 5/5
Oooh hunni, I hope you don't really do this. I used to be anorexic a couple of years ago, and it still affects my eating pattern. I hope that you are ok :) But this poem is very well written, and you described everything very well, with some great word usage. Great job on this. Keep it up & Stay strong! 5/5
Gah... I used to have problems with this. You explained it just as it happened. I could totally relate... I hope you're feeling better and have passed those dark times of life. They are very hard, trust me, I know.
No, it is not the same poem, i wrote this, this is my orginial poem and it shouldn't be in your book.
11 years ago
by Beautifully Nothing
I am seriously at a loss of words. That was an amazing poem. I am going through it right now, and it feels like if you don't get to binge and purge your entire schedule has gone to hell. I am truly sorry for whatever inspired you. The poem makes you think a lot, wonderful job. Keep writing!