In A Child`s Eyes (Haiku)

by Timothy r   Jul 10, 2006


Clouds loom overhead
shapes of clowns and motor boats
blocking heaven`s gaze

© copyright 2006 by Timothy r

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Haiku is a Japanese style.
They consist of 3 lines.
Haiku has a strict syllable count of 5, 7, 5.
They are based on nature

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  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Its a wonder how children see things
    compared to adults..I like this carefree piece
    :) Thank you also for the comment...take care.

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was a beautiful haiku. You used excellent wording for this. Loved it. Keep it up, and thanks for your comment.

    Natalie``

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    I bow down to anyone who can write a haiku. I can't seem to get a message across in just three lines. Silly me. This one is great.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Oooooh... I love this poem! Especially the last line, very creative! Congrats on your 30th poem! 5/5 Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Denise Butler

    Magnificent Tim, what a title! This definitely brings back memories as a child...and as an adult too, I still look at the clouds from time to time, brilliant in its imagery. Thank you for writing it. Denise

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