Comments : This Love's Suicide

  • 11 years ago

    by JAYMA SUMMERS

    "Darling, just keep killing me
    That's all that's left to do
    For death is so much easier
    Than living without you"

    OMG I LOVED IT SO MUCH THIS PART MADE ME CRY CUZ I FEEL THIS WAY"LOVE HURTS!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Cuddles

    I'm blown away. This poem got me because I know this feeling all too well. You are truly one of the most amazing poetesses ever. Just incredible

  • 11 years ago

    by emmajaynexo

    I agree with cuddles. You're a great inspiration to anyone. Amazing.

  • 11 years ago

    by mimzy

    Beautiful and well written..
    Great work!

  • 11 years ago

    by Samantha

    Wow. another amazing piece. you are an amazing writer. i love the flow of this poem. its absolutly perfect! keep it up!

    sammie.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lu

    Whomever came up with " love hurts" really knew what they were talking about for sure...

    Your sadness flows from each stanza creating a feeling that many people know so well and can relate to.
    Heart-touching poem TinyD, written with so much emotion ....

  • 11 years ago

    by Brian

    This poem expresses all the hurt and
    pain when someone you love goes .
    well written

  • 11 years ago

    by mollymoo

    I love this poem its amazing!!

    **molly**

  • 11 years ago

    by Michele

    Wow, sweetie, you've been hurt so much, it really sucks, I know. I'm sure everybody can relate! Poetry gives us all a way to express our feelings. Your poem was really good it tugs at the heart strings. Keep writing.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lost IN a RIVER of Tears

    I think that that was raelly good poem....

  • 11 years ago

    by samantha

    I loved ur poem... it was the realest thin i have read in a long time... most poems about love are beautiful and happy... but ur not afraid to show the other side with all the pain.... I love this part...

    Rip away my bleeding heart
    Right from this very chest
    For when it comes to killing me
    You do it very best

  • 11 years ago

    by JAYMA SUMMERS

    I knew this poem was going to be rated in the top 5,its the best it needs to be number one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!your the best!!!!lol

  • 11 years ago

    by Brooke

    Absolutely amazing!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Heidi

    Soooooo good! oh my god. i absolutely loved it, it was soo amazing. definatly no words to discribe this one.

    heidi

  • 11 years ago

    by Ashley

    I really like this poem.... It was great.... Keep up the work...

  • 11 years ago

    by neishalee

    Oh my god i loved thid poem the way you express yourself and put your feelings into words. right when i started reading i didnt want to stop the first line mad me want to keep on going. you have a very special talent and ur words!!! incredible!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by neishalee

    Oh my god ur poem is so touching. you know how to express ur feelings in a way that makes people see and feel what u are feeling. The first line i started reading made me want to keep on and you use these incredible strong words that show feelings!!! I LOVE IT!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by KRISTA

    I GIVE YOU A 5/5!!!! YOU DID SUCH A GREAT JOB WITH THAT POEM!!! THAT'S EXACTLY HOW I FEEL RIGHT NOW!! GREAT JOB!

  • 11 years ago

    by Valerie Rose

    Wow. i love your poems. this one is great !

  • This poem is amazing..I know exactly how you feel..me and my ex broke up after almost 2 years..and it feels like he slowly tries to kill me and sometimes it feels like if i just die i will be better...this poem is great.. wonderful job..5/5...
    Crystal