Wow, sweetie, you've been hurt so much, it really sucks, I know. I'm sure everybody can relate! Poetry gives us all a way to express our feelings. Your poem was really good it tugs at the heart strings. Keep writing.
I loved ur poem... it was the realest thin i have read in a long time... most poems about love are beautiful and happy... but ur not afraid to show the other side with all the pain.... I love this part...
Rip away my bleeding heart
Right from this very chest
For when it comes to killing me
You do it very best
Oh my god i loved thid poem the way you express yourself and put your feelings into words. right when i started reading i didnt want to stop the first line mad me want to keep on going. you have a very special talent and ur words!!! incredible!!!
Oh my god ur poem is so touching. you know how to express ur feelings in a way that makes people see and feel what u are feeling. The first line i started reading made me want to keep on and you use these incredible strong words that show feelings!!! I LOVE IT!!!!
This poem is amazing..I know exactly how you feel..me and my ex broke up after almost 2 years..and it feels like he slowly tries to kill me and sometimes it feels like if i just die i will be better...this poem is great.. wonderful job..5/5...