I really like this poem, its extremely touching!

Very nicely done, I like the flow of this poem. You have some wonderful talent.... keep it up

I feel the hurt in every word..... and each stanza that a heart feels when it's broken and betrayed! Great Poem and good Imagery

This is one of the most heartbreaking and beautiful poems I have ever read.My God, I can so relate to everything you have said here, I can feel every emotion from my own experience.You have written this so perfectly and communicated so much that so many of us have felt or are feeling.So sad and beautiful.This touched me deply.

Take care,
Gary Jurechka

Wow!!!!! that was beautiful, and excellent word choices, it was great!!!
~lilia~

Greatest poem ever!!!id give it a 10 if i could.lol.please comment on some of my poems too.ttyl
:~:heidi:~:

Excellent write!!! very descriptive!

Missy

Soo sad
but good

Your an amazing poet...I really like how you put things!

OMFG...This is...wow. It's So Effing good!!

Wow-this is such a powerful piece.I can very much relate to these feelings.The rhyme scheme and flow of the piece is excellent, but it is the emotion that really sinks into the heart and soul.The love and loss and the melancholy haunting-I know this too well.You have really captured the essence of it all so well.Though time may heal all wounds, as they say, some things do tend to linger on.It comes down to a matter of acceptence and letting go-once this is done the capacity to love again is there.It is all up to you.This is such a heartbreaking poem of love and loss and longing, so very well expressed.You are a true poet.

You know what i dont like you......................you are just to good naw j/p u are good i like how u right........................why dont you become a poem writer and publish them in the world

I am so envious of your talent...

Another beautiful poem of yours ;)
last stanza was perfectly written =)

very great poem sweetness, I can so relate to this!
happy for you
NemO xxxxxxxxxxx

Terribly clever, a feeling I have too often experienced captured well with words.

Thanks for the comment btw, I haven't been on this in ages and I thought you might have vanished as well. Great to hear from you =)

The flow of this is indescribable, it really pulls me in and grabs every once of my attention.
Amazing, 5/5.

Haunt me with the memories
From our relationship
Kill me with your gentle kiss
That lingers on these lips

This is my favorite part in the whole thing. I love it because it means so much to me.