Comments : Forever and Always

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Very sweet and again I can't find much to critisise. I did not like the first piece of talking because talking generally does not rhyme so it seems un-natural however the second part, being a vow is understandable. Its nicely written, flows smoothly and you are certainly a great authour. Best of luck.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cassie

    WOW is all i can say to this. It was an exquisite piece. The flow was amazing. Totally brilliant, a masterpiece of the heart.

  • 17 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    Aww omg that was so sweet.
    Now I want someone to love.
    That was such a beautiful poem. I really loved it.
    There is nothing else to say about this
    WOW
    I can't wait to read more of your poetry in the future.
    5/5
    Breanna

  • 17 years ago

    by nightschild

    Wow....
    what a beautiful poem.
    its breathtaking!
    excellent word usage as well as fantastic rhyming.
    the vibe of this poem is so bright and etherial
    i love it

  • 17 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    Nice! Really nice it was good, it was wonderful. The flow was great one word fit into the next great job you are a wonderful poet!

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    I like how it flowed together very nice and this is a very sweet poem good job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    So beatifully romantic, I am speechless !( I never thought that would ever happen...me speechless OMG.....lol)
    My heart is all melting and everything . The flow is magical and the entire poem is beautiful .

    You have painted a beautiful picture of love and devotion .....awww just beautiful.

  • 17 years ago

    by CalVein

    Wow...dude...this is really nice....very well planned out...the words are simple and effective...good job...nice one...cheers

  • 17 years ago

    by i LOVEE HiM XO

    OMG i LOVED TtHATt!!!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by No one

    Ohmygoodness! It's amazing! It's absolutly wonderful, I love every single word of it! Great Great Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Julie

    Ii lovee itt!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ana

    This poem was so sweet and it was rele romantic....well if u are getttin married i bet ur vows will be even more beautiful i loved the poem tho...

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Hey u. i was soo happy wen u commented on my poem!! havent heard from u in ages!! i was rapt l0l anyway this was really g0od p0em. beautifully w0rded. great j0b very touching. always l0ve readin ur work! keep it up! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by neishalee

    This is excellent. I love the way you put your words together and how you make your words so alive and vivid. i like it very good. keep it up!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Hikaru Izumi

    Oh my god!! The poem's so cute!!! I love it so much!!! Keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by mollymoo

    I love it!! it was very sweet!

    **molly**

  • 17 years ago

    by Martin

    I must say darien your work is truly a masterpiece, a work of art i tell you. you dont stumble upon too many poems with the nice ryhme and context all at the same time but i guess this one is one in a million.bravo and encore.

  • 17 years ago

    by ur green eyez babygirl

    Wow.....i loved it.....you did an incredible job.....

  • 17 years ago

    by cecilia

    Love that peom.your wife is lucky to have a husband like you.from this peom it sounds like your wedding is beautiful.much luck on your new life with your wife.

  • 17 years ago

    by Amy

    Aw. That truly was very sweet and romantic. The rhyming made it all flow together very nicely. Lovely work
    xxx Ami