Great poem.

I love it, it's frikkin awesome. Great work.
Staci

I'm not too great at leaving long comments but you always put so much into yours so, I'mma give it a try. ^_^ This poem seriously gave me cold chills everywhere. It's that weird feeling where, ya'know, you're just reading and it's at the end but you can't move or think. "Wow" is really the only way to describe this. A perfect write. ^_^

-Carissa-

Wow. I loved this poem and the ending was perfect

For he's my inner child
Right in my heart here

Brilliant.

Kelly
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Waauw Andrew, that's a perfect poem! It hit me.. =( but still it's beautiful because you make the sense of the poem come right on to the reader..

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Last stanza kind of gave me shivers down my spine, but I don't mean it was scary, I mean it was touching - very emotional write. Although it's sad, it's also very beautiful.