Awwwe! Hun *hugs* Well written poem, cannot wait for the second one to come out. Great flow and excellent words. 5/5

XxXI.Lubb.Pink.GlueXxX

Wowwww amazing great job~ you are my lover~britt

Aww. That was soo good!! I liked it very much. I am going to read the next one now!! YAYY. whee.

-Jennifer. Overall Rating: Undecided.

How sad!
=( great job though....
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Favorite stanza:

And I'm rushing downtown to meet you.
The city light a blur.
In the midst of the crowd, I see you two share a kiss.
And I realize...I could never be her.

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I know that feeling a little too well!
*a bijillion/5*
Take care!!

xOx

Ur so good at rytin poems!! Especially loved part one n two of this poem..im sure the third on wil b gr8!! Ur a gr8 poet!! xxxxxx