Wow...i'm not even american and that made me cry. Good job.

That mady me cry!!! it was sad but really good

Wow.. so true.. that puts all the war in perspective for the ppl that kinda ignore it.. great job!! 5/5 keep it up and luv it

~kas

Wow i really liked it alot...NICE JOB!!!

Ok i just wanted to tell you, your poem is absolutly amazing! I love it! Keep up the good work!

Ok i just wanted to tell you, your poem is absolutly amazing! I love it! Keep up the good work!

Wow. It sounds like you know a lot about how these people think. Like, how they may die at any moment. I had never thought of it that way. The flow was perfect, and rhyming was a little cliche, but the poem was well done overall. Great job. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Ecellent poem... i liked it a lot and it showed the american spirit and courage... good job. lol. totally a 5/5

Great 5/5
nice wording

Wow this is a great poem i have 2 bros in the military and this is a great tribute to all soldiers

laura

That was a good poem! i loved it! you rhymed well and made it flow it has a good meaning and message to it

Wow!!!... tht was such a great poem!!! 5/5

Great poem.
Good message and flow.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Take care

This has a strong message in it. =] I don't like war and soldiers and stuff, but this was a cool poem. And I liked it ^_^
5/5
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This is a sad poem in a way but very good!! 5/5 great job!

Wow that was really good 5/5 keep up the good work

Getting ready for war,
They head to their rooms,
Knowing that soon,
They may all meet their dooms.

it wuz great, that wuz my fav part up there. =D this poem had great sentence flowing, and meaning-even emotion... o.o thatz hard 2 get all in 1, none of my poems can beh this great.... -.- 5/5 Great job ^^

Great job,
rlly true and i loved it
my dad and uncle went to war a few years back....
5/5 great job
i loved it

You summed it all up!! great job!!! 5/5 ♥

This is truley amazing. Good work. It's touching bc I know so many ppl who are soldiers. Great job. :)