Comments : American Soldiers

  • 11 years ago

    by Twisted Fate

    Wow...i'm not even american and that made me cry. Good job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Elmo

    That mady me cry!!! it was sad but really good

  • 11 years ago

    by AmazinglyEmpty

    Wow.. so true.. that puts all the war in perspective for the ppl that kinda ignore it.. great job!! 5/5 keep it up and luv it

    ~kas

  • 11 years ago

    by Jennifer

    Wow i really liked it alot...NICE JOB!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Kathryn

    Ok i just wanted to tell you, your poem is absolutly amazing! I love it! Keep up the good work!

  • 11 years ago

    by Kathryn

    Ok i just wanted to tell you, your poem is absolutly amazing! I love it! Keep up the good work!

  • 11 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Wow. It sounds like you know a lot about how these people think. Like, how they may die at any moment. I had never thought of it that way. The flow was perfect, and rhyming was a little cliche, but the poem was well done overall. Great job. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 11 years ago

    by A Fallen Angel

    Ecellent poem... i liked it a lot and it showed the american spirit and courage... good job. lol. totally a 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by LovelessAndConfused

    Great 5/5
    nice wording

  • 10 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Wow this is a great poem i have 2 bros in the military and this is a great tribute to all soldiers

    laura

  • 10 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    That was a good poem! i loved it! you rhymed well and made it flow it has a good meaning and message to it

  • 10 years ago

    by ourlilsecret

    Wow!!!... tht was such a great poem!!! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    Good message and flow.
    I really enjoyed reading it.
    Take care

  • 10 years ago

    by Birgit

    This has a strong message in it. =] I don't like war and soldiers and stuff, but this was a cool poem. And I liked it ^_^
    5/5
    x

  • 10 years ago

    by BreakMyWingsAndRun

    This is a sad poem in a way but very good!! 5/5 great job!

  • 10 years ago

    by always and forever

    Wow that was really good 5/5 keep up the good work

  • 9 years ago

    by unblue skye

    Getting ready for war,
    They head to their rooms,
    Knowing that soon,
    They may all meet their dooms.

    it wuz great, that wuz my fav part up there. =D this poem had great sentence flowing, and meaning-even emotion... o.o thatz hard 2 get all in 1, none of my poems can beh this great.... -.- 5/5 Great job ^^

  • 9 years ago

    by halie

    Great job,
    rlly true and i loved it
    my dad and uncle went to war a few years back....
    5/5 great job
    i loved it

  • 9 years ago

    by TheBarefootedCowgirl

    You summed it all up!! great job!!! 5/5 ♥

  • 5 years ago

    by Just A Stupid Girl

    This is truley amazing. Good work. It's touching bc I know so many ppl who are soldiers. Great job. :)