Wow. It sounds like you know a lot about how these people think. Like, how they may die at any moment. I had never thought of it that way. The flow was perfect, and rhyming was a little cliche, but the poem was well done overall. Great job. =) 5/5 xoxo
Getting ready for war,
They head to their rooms,
Knowing that soon,
They may all meet their dooms.
it wuz great, that wuz my fav part up there. =D this poem had great sentence flowing, and meaning-even emotion... o.o thatz hard 2 get all in 1, none of my poems can beh this great.... -.- 5/5 Great job ^^