T.L. --
Again, another great poem from you. The emotion and imagery you put into this was amazing ;; it made it a LOT more interesting to read. Also, the rhyming and the flow was perfect. I liked how you kind of , in a way, combined two stanzas into one 8 line stanza. It added a nice twist. So, great job, 5/5 =D

Samantha Hollywood

This was a great poem, so full of emotion!!!The rhyming a flow were great!!!! I liked the structure of the poem to it ade it more interesting to read!! Great Job 5/5!!

This was sooo sad...i can totally relate to it!The whole poem was perfect the flow the rhyming...There were lots of emotions in this poem!!
Awesome write!!
Keep Writing!!
Take care!

Really good! 5/5. I can relate a lot to this poem, because I am the same way, only I hide the real me behind a facade of happiness.

This poem is very sad, and it almost made me cry. It was very original and very sad. My favorite part of this poem was:

"You must listen closer,
To what I say,
There is a hidden meaning,
I hide from you,
Everyday."

That's how I feel as well. you did such a good job on this poem. Keep it up!

~BJ~

Wow, that's a sad poem. Ha all these sad poems are getting to me, but I love them so much. Great job Dear.

Wow what a beautifel powerful poem....i really enjoyed reading this...your a good writer keep it up i hope you have a smile on ur face u deserve it...like i smile when people leave comments lol
enjoy

Another great poem with great feelings showed, you are a very talented poet.

That was a really good poem loved the imagery. keep it up

Wow i was looking at all your poems and this one means something to me the most. i completely understand it and i love it! all your work is awesome! keep it up...i have a ton of poems i just never have the time to put them up...lol...

I realy like this one :]]

i know how you feel its not easy hiding your emotinons t othe world and only thinking you only have yourself to turn to