I like it! but i think you've done better stuff... it really shows your personality though =D

Wow I love this and it is so deep and I feel it for I just want throught it myself keep up the great work 5/5

I didnt like this one as i liked your darker ones...but it was still a lovely love poem:) I enjoyed reading it and felt that raw emotion. Good job:):)

Did you ever love me?
Did you ever care?
Did you ever spend your time
Wishing i was there?

best stanza of the poem, this about brian too?