Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant!
Wow, what an ending...I love it.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Im left speechless this is a great piece Melissa you have a great way with words, spectacular descriptions and use of metaphors within each stanza. Beautifully penned...

Wow, Melissa-this piece is so honest, so totally uninhibited.I am truly impressed and amazed!It has just a hint of vulgarity yet it has such grace at its soul.The last stanza and line are outstanding in emotion and meaning.This is so bare, so honest, so true-One of your finest yet.

Gary

You ROCK! You are so talented and it shines in this poem. Great job!

I really enjoyed this piece. I haven't found many writers where I can follow their flow and understand what they wanted the readers to understand. Great job!