Wow.. that was really good. It was so heartfelt.. I hope that you are ok.. I know there are many people in my life I will never forget because I feel as though they've ruined it. But you did a great job on this. Keep it up 5/5

This is really deep and well written-It is really sad and you incorporated your pain into the poem well----The format makes it easy for the reader to read and the stanzas are broken up well. The only thing you may want to correct is that there are a few site errors throughout the piece. Amazing write! 5/5 Stay Strong---

Very well expressed. It is evident that you are yet fearful of your past and still feel a great deal of hate for what has happened to you. But, I believe you will go on in life- even so, having to look at what’s happened to you- but knowing you fought it all by remaining strong. A beautifully written piece; well done =].

God bless you,
-Elysium.

So deep
another great poem

Holy hell. you are a great great writer. this was soooooooooooooooo very sad. i actually said 'aww' out loud lol if this is true. oh gosh -hugs- your emotions throughout this piece are brilliant, i can feel your anger and your persistence was just incredible. i loved this one the most. 5/5

That was really good.

Woahhhhh! That is so sad and powerfully written. I can feel the anger and pain from this poem, such raw emotions you expressed here. You did so well, for something so terrible, you seemed to express all your emotions perfectly. A fantastic write. Keep it up. 5/5

That was such a deep, sad, heartfelt poem.. So beautifully written, but could feel the pain whilst reading it.. Excellent 5/5 xx

Wow. That really put tears in my eyes. I'm so sorry this has happened to you. Please try and keep your head up. Hold on and stay strong.

Been a while sorry i just got back from my duty station in georgia anyhow you should take it easy man have a beer relax a little and the poem was great i hope for your sake its not as bad as you described it well here in the next month i might have some new anyhow thanx for the comment buddy and i liked the poem and i have been through some of the same things well bye bye for now

This is really really good.
I hope your okay,
it seems like you've been through a lot
take care
xox

Still nothing new anyhow you should keep writing i havent seen anything new from you in a while

Hey!! i loved this poem sooo much! its soo sad! im sorry you had to go through so much!
but i loved the poem because of the way it dragged me in from the first line..actually, just the title! its soo meaningfull! kep it up!
take care hun
xx

Another beautiful write. i love the way your poems hold soo much meaning, and it is still really understandable, filled with lots of emotion but still feelable :)
nuff luv x