I liked it alot. Love to see it finished. Great so far. Really related. Great flow. Really well written. Take care. 5\5. Love you to comment on any of mine.

W0W!! I love that poem. Well i'm kind of speechless about it but i jus really got into it. The rhyming was excellent and had a good rhythm. 5/5

Ohh hunni, my heart bleeds for you, I feel your pain and I can relate to what you are going through.

And as I beg for someone to care
Tell me there is no one there

I care about you, so don't ever think that you are alone, I am alwasy here for you no matter what. i am only an email away okay sweety....Hope things gets better for you soon...

Love you hun... - Sabrina