Omg!! :( 5/5

Wow thank u so much for truthful comments and openeing u to me! ur poems are truly amazing!!! very impacting!! u have such a talent in ur words!!!
5/5
stay strong!!!

This is so trong and powerful maybe a metaphor somewhere? i duno jus a suggestion its really good though xxx alex xxx

Wow id love to have read more it was really unusual if this happend then sori bout da situation but good poem anyways :):) alex xxx

Ok. Loads of grammar mistakes, but still well done lol.

OMG! the poor baby! You let it die! >.< I'm just being me, no worries lol. It was very well written. I am so sorry if it's true. =( The flow was good, and the words were excellent. Great write. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

This was yet another beautiful poem with a grat flow of wrods that never stray from the subject and yet another sad poem. how sad. im sorry about the loss. this was a magnificent poem.

Wow. Sad but beautiful, and a 5/5

WOW this is so sad. but its really well written 5/5

Omgosh. excellent poem. stuck for words.
so touching.. excellently written. =)
5/5
xxx

I like the poem, its sad, makes me wanna cry tho.. cause the babies dead.. sorry i love babies... but yah .. i sent you a message back talk later bye

*Rhiannon*