Comments : Bring Me Far, Or Bring Me Back.

  • 17 years ago

    by Raychil

    What a beautiful poem Memoirs. It was indescribable. You put so much of your heart and feeling into it. I know how it feels when you feel like the hurt you just escaped is coming back again, you'll get through it, you're strong and if you beat it once you can do it again. You're an amazing poet, just keep writing it out. A wonderful poem you have here, 5/5. brilliant.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    Great poem..You have excellent potential.. and also for bein young i know its hard writin sometimes..i know this cuz i am 15..ur poem is undescribably true...awesome poem..keep writing!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Wow-Amazing write! I love the rhyme in it and the emotion is perfectly described. My favorite part is the last two lines--They sum up the poem wonderfully---Great work-Keep it up-5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    Really good! love the symbolics!
    really good writing skills someone has got here :P

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow I loved this one it was amazing yet again! nice job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Leslie

    'My mind is a mystery I cannot solve.'
    I love that line. great poem!