Comments : A Simple Photo...

  • 12 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    A very refleshing non-rhyme poem. Beautiful write

  • 12 years ago

    by iheartu

    That was beautiful, and i think the last lines summed it up perfectly - and I agree - life is definately like photography...it all depends on your outlook! I also think it flowed very nicely! Great work! 5/5
    -Sarah

  • 12 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, I liked how your described like to a photo or taking a picture. I have never heard that anaolgy before. It does make a lot of sense. People's views are how they see things, and everyoen interpret's it differently. That is something I learned in philosophy. It's complicated, but there is no real explanation. Good stuff, I liked the topic your brought up.

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie

    WOw! This was actually really really good. You used excellent imagry in this too. I loved it. I also think they way you ended it was perfect. I def. wouldn't change a thing. Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 12 years ago

    by Sole

    Even after the months I have not read your poetry, I still find it impressively beautiful. Life is like a photograph. I really loved this 'angle' (- if you'll pardon the pun) that you have written the poem from. Very nice work, I look forwards to reading more.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 12 years ago

    by TrueLovesVictim

    Awww i really liked it

  • 12 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    I like it...
    It is true.
    There is no right or wrong point of view to life.
    But you have to look at all your choices.
    Excellent job on this. You did a great job on it.

    >black&&blue

  • 12 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Interestingly original. Something I never would have thought of.

    I'd give you kudos if I could.

    As always~ Kate

  • 12 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Interestingly original. Something I never would have thought of.

    I'd give you kudos if I could.

    As always~ Kate

  • 12 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    I really like this. I read so much of everyone's depression or love poetry that it took me off guard. It's beautifully written and an amazingly interesting topic. Great job.

  • 12 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    A photo can portray a moment in time in a way you only see through photography. It's funny it must be the time of year for image poems; my latest is about photos in a way. I liked the fifth stanza the best, there was just something about the choice of words that appealed to me.
    The only suggestion I have is on the second line I think it would sound better and make more sense as "glanced AT by many."
    Thanks for sharing.

  • 12 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very true meaningful poem. Great descriptions, very tranquil feelings.

  • 12 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Hmm...no wonder I thought this poem sounded familiar, I've already read it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Krissey

    Wow! Now there is something I never heard of..Life being compared to a photograph! I LOVE THAT! THis was a great poem because honestly, it was so true..your imagery was amazing I just loved how I could picture everything you talked about!
    Nice write!
    -Krissey

  • 12 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Not too bad... The message was a bit mixed, to me though. I'm not sure how I felt about this.... But I know I didn't love it. It was very strongly written though.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 12 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow this is a really great poem. i never read a poem about photograhpy before, but i defiantly like this one a lot. it's really true about what it says. keep it up! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • Hey great poem, i really like the last two Lines, are they supposed to be a sort of moral,? Like in life you can always see things, but from a different point of view, there another perspective you have missed?
    Well done, 5/5 Love
    ~She Died Screaming

  • 11 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    I love how it seems that you draw a picture with words. A beautiful poem that speaks to the heart and opens the eyes.
    I really like your choice of words, and it is really an incredible poem.
    5/5
    ~Stevie

  • 11 years ago

    by Allison

    It sounds like it could be a sound, but the flow could be a bit better. *5/5*

    Alyson

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is a wonderful write. I really enjoyed the meaning you gave at the end.