Awesome! Compile your poems. Publish them. I can see you being the next US Poet Lauret (sp?). You are awesome and bring an insight that few can rival.

Compile your poems. Publish them. I'll buy your book first!

Really brilliant poem! You've written it so well... Fantastic job!

I like the way you can capture what we all can see, descriptive and real, in any cafe around the world.

I liked the different POV you give, it is one we do not see often. Nice work.

This is an excellent poem - I loved the words you used. Each word I read it added more detail to the picture growing in my mind of this man sitting in a cafe eating... I loved the poem you wrote for the competition too (the one about nature and Sunny)!! Definitely going onto my favourites so I can read more as you write it. 5/5

Your words are so descriptive and beautiful, I really like this one. It's so easy to picture what you write about.
Awesome.

Excellent, i love the idea's you come with up and the way your portray them. Your work impressess me everytime!

I love this one, are you published?

Funny, poignant, and perfectly symmetrical..
all at once......Bravo!

by the way I had a resonantly similar experience at a Howard Johnson's on
2nd Avenue in NYC in 1964.....

and WoW..are you ever right...:

"and I cannot swallow the idea
that I'm part of the problem,"

metaphors! metaphors!
author! author!

can u tell i dug this piece?