Comments : I must leave you

  • 11 years ago

    by Raychel

    Lmao i love this...my best friend (sorefromreality) and i know something along these lines...lol. this is so funny...keep it up!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    That was soo good!!!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by gone back to him

    That was good! I was confused until I got to the bottom, then I understood it all. 5/5 I loved it!

    ~Love Me Always~
    ~Nicole~

  • 11 years ago

    by limp

    Lmaoo.

  • 11 years ago

    by Desiree

    I think that your idea was great, I just got lost throughout the poem until the end. I think I know the effect that you was going for just make sure that your poems have a consistent flow. I struggle with it sometimes also.

  • 11 years ago

    by Confused Queen

    That funny u good keep up the good work

  • 11 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Whoa! lmao...u hav a good funny streak in u. differetn from wut i normally read from u but really good... good job, thx for ur comments,
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 11 years ago

    by chixanoodle

    ZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
    it made me fall asleep

  • 11 years ago

    by Krisanta

    LMAO omg this was good chaught me off graud i thought it was gonna be about a boy i loved it lol. _krisanta_

  • 11 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Lmao.. omg that's great. I loved it! Great job on this.. 5/5 Keep it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by Mitsuki

    Cute

  • 11 years ago

    by Amber

    That was a great poem ..i loved it ..check some of my poems up

  • 11 years ago

    by Phoebe

    I love the ending! i had no idea u were talking baout beer! lol

  • 11 years ago

    by Rayarra Jones

    That was very good. I liked the way that you made it seem like you was talking about a dude and then switched it up to drinkin a beer.

  • 11 years ago

    by Purple

    I had to read this after I saw all the comments, and yes, very good, and Very funny. I love it...

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    LOL! that was funny.. great ending.. i was really getting ready to hear what bad thing you were getting upto.. nice job!

  • 11 years ago

    by Tormented

    Lmaoooooooooo

  • 10 years ago

    by Iflookscouldkill

    Thank you for confirming that for me, about your song. Pretty frickin haliourious poem by the way.

  • 10 years ago

    by Leah

    Hillarous, lol

  • 10 years ago

    by tarah

    Hahaha this is amazing