Daz a really gud poem. itz so cute nd i culd relate to it. wow ur only 12 nd ur work iz truly amazin. keep writin =D

SheLLz

Really cute poem. I love it.

Awww i loved it thats happen to mi before

U have a gift my friend and age dose not madder keep writting

Hey you are a great writer for an 11 grader you are a good writer

Really good!!! i can relate! its like how it used to be with my ex....ur really great writer for ur age....keep up the good work....thx 4 the comment
andi

Lov the poem

THIS IS SO ME AND MA EX BOY..SUPPOSIBLYE HE WAS THE UGLIEST THING EVER AND I COULD DO SO MUCH BETTER BUT I LOVED HIM MORE AND MORE PPL WERE TALKIN SHIT..LOL..ND NOW WE ARE LIKE BEST FRIENDS AFTER BEIN 2GETHER FOR LIKE ALMOST A YEAR..GOSH I LIKE UR POEMS

As long as there's love on both sides... looks mean nothing!
Well i feel that way anyway, but i've always liked the look of Marcus, lmao
Very strong poem..
5/5
*Gem*

Aww. this happened to me. in 7th grade there was this guy i HATED!!! total "nerd". in 8th grade we became friends and i fell 4 him..... HARD. every1 would be like Ewwwww. he's a nerd he's ugly. but through my eyes he was perfect.Dont let ppl keep u from being with the one you love!

Awww how cute!! I loved this poem, you have some real natural talent there!! Keep up- the good work and thanx for the comments on my poems!
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~

Awwwwwww it isssssssssssss soooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeee comment me