I agree with stomy, this was truly an amazing, real speaking to the person poem... reality hits and sometimes as you said, we lie to ourselves and try to be happy in ways not possible... thank you for this piece, I love it. Thanks also for the comment you have made on one of my poems... God Bless You.

Love,
Libby

I love this poem very much. You are really a very top-rated poet.
Keep up!

melissa

That is so good
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Your the best poet i've found yet. not because you try to make it rhyme which you offen dont as that limits the message of the poem. but the content sees behind the illusions we all try to hide behind. keep it up and i cant wait to read the next one

The last stanza brings the reader back to the world from the images you create. i see i have alot to still learn

Beautiful so true, so real...

As I wipe the tears from my eyes, i wonder, i think, frustrated by life itself..amazed by the beauty of paper and pen, touched by one man's emotions towards life, towards my thoughts of life alone.. i lay on my desk, face covered in tears, quickly wiping away scared of thoughts of an intruder...

BEAUTIFUL JUST BEAUTIFUL poet.... best I have ever read..

Oh my god not only you have to wipe your tears away me too..........omg that got my body to shiver about it.......you are very very good

I really enjoyed this poem. it will make you stop and think about things! I also wiped the tears when I read it! Excellent!

Wow, this poem is great. (The only thing that bothers me is that hospital rooms are never sterile, only the OR is supposedly LOL.)

Wow. i cannot even begin to explain to much this poem moved me...it is truly a beautiful, sad, but inspirational poem. i LOVED it!
i haven't read one this good in a while.
thank you..
--Viola